David Hines (hradzka) wrote,
David Hines
hradzka

APED: "i noticed something about free verse"

i noticed something
about free verse
lots of it is really passive-aggressive

you hurt me
you didn't love me
you made me sad

like that

except
they never say who "you" is
wusses

hey ian
yeah you
the guy who always got all the other kids to gang up on me in snowball fights when we were six
about your wife

i shtupped her
Tags: a poem every day
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