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APED: "not a race"

April 16th, 2009 (11:08 pm)

Long-legs walked with lengthy strides,
short-legs quickly ran beside,
no-legs followed best he could,
one-leg ran with one of wood.

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Posted by: riah_chan (riah_chan)
Posted at: April 17th, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)

It's fun to read you daily poems. I've been doing poetry for the last month with my Resource English middle schoolers so it's refreshing to see someone having fun with poetry.

Posted by: David Hines (hradzka)
Posted at: April 17th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)

Thank you! Glad to offer refreshment.

Posted by: Mari (marici)
Posted at: April 17th, 2009 05:21 pm (UTC)

A man, his shadow, a sack he's carrying and the cane he walks with?

Posted by: David Hines (hradzka)
Posted at: April 17th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)

...I had not thought of this as actually having an answer, but I think you are right! YOU WIN.

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