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APED: "the count's niece's invitation"

July 18th, 2009 (03:54 pm)
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The count's poor scribe has taken sick.
He's quite ill, so this falls to me:
Evening brings dear Uncle's ball.
You're invited. Come and see.

By the bye, if you have heard --
I did -- foul rumors, spread by some
These are lies. Be not deterred.
Everything is well. Please come.

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Posted by: Mara (marag)
Posted at: July 18th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
 Don't mess with me

::snerk:: I like this :D

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Posted by: David Hines (hradzka)
Posted at: July 26th, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)

Thankee!

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Posted by: Mari (marici)
Posted at: July 18th, 2009 08:29 pm (UTC)

So is she warning the reader off? Sweet, but dangerous.

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Posted by: David Hines (hradzka)
Posted at: July 26th, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)

Yep. In acrostic verse! (She's classy.)

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Posted by: vito excalibur (vito_excalibur)
Posted at: July 25th, 2009 04:04 pm (UTC)

I liked this one! I thought it was surprisingly creepy!

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Posted by: David Hines (hradzka)
Posted at: July 26th, 2009 10:59 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I didn't know quite how it turned out, myself.

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